The Workermonkey

Tuesday, August 31, 2004

Some tings dat needs a sayin  

# posted by murphy @ 8/31/2004 12:32:00 PM

the white boy is back.

im glad to see that you are off weed bb, now you can be as self rightious as you want. you know what i mean with your damn comments about cigarrettes. all you need to do now is stop drinking and you can condemn us all. im happy to see that you are quitting, seriously, ive been cutting it down to about once or twice a week. but lets be honest its Kim isnt it.

dont get me wrong i like her but she is poisioning your ear and clouding your mind with anti-murphy propoganda that you are begining to believe. why dont you tell her to stop trying to save everyone and look at herself.

did you know she smokes cigarrettes? she smoked at least five at the wedding. what the fuck do you have to say about that? think about that next time you want to say anything to jen about smoking.

The bottom line is that lately you've been condicending towards the both of us. fix your own god damned problems before you try and fix mine. thanks.

i like kim i think shes a nice girl and you make a nice couple but when we hang out i dont want to feel like im with my parents.

anyways.....sorry if this came across harsh but im venting--and dealing with the apt is getting on my nerves especially the cat, and obviously jenny.

i read the story you wrote and parts of it were good but most of it was crap. i know that i havent writen anything in a while and im not the best writer myself but the story needs work.

first of all one curb not five
Cain not Kane-not a big deal
murphy brothers not wild dogs
everyone was drunk and you were not the voice of reason.
KES?-story did not include, yet?

most of the story is funny but its too fanciful 1/2 that shit did not happen

as far as the writing itself. some of the wording is cleachea ( clee shea) "the place smelled of stale b.o. and stale beer

------im not trying to be a dick the story needs work. word choice and stlye is something we all need to work on. i dont want any dark and stormy nights

i am not alone is saying that these storys that we are writing should be as factual as possible--nothing is more interesting than the truth.


by the way this weekend mom in France and john at the Cape.

RAGER IN HADDAM NECK COME ONE COME ALL

hope this email did not upset you branciforte-we need to have another meeting soon.

on a personal level. im glad to hear you are quitting and i should probably do the same

i love you man

peace out bitches and dont forget this weekend. call me 377 8833

1 comments

what night? friday or sat?

By  ron, at Tuesday, August 31, 2004 1:28:00 PM  

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